development work for proposal 
Feedback 21/03/20
proposal aim to be concise and consider what its is that you need to say - they will have lots to review so clear, well thought out presentations will be important. Use bullet points to explain - what its is/ why it belongs in the public space/ how the work will be made/ what impact you are aiming to achieve. Be ambitious for the outcome don't let money or practicality be the main concern...It is a factor so a degree of realism
 I really like the idea of the people sign post you could do something really interesting with that and the way you’ve mocked up drawings looks fab
 really like the concept of the 'half bodies'/ people emerging from the floor. Most draw to the people as they feel both integrated yet prominent within the space
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